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Boomer is in ELL level 2!!
Author’s Spotlight-Boomer
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– December 9, 2010
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i miss you boy
I like the part when you said zoom!
I also liked your details. Would you go down zip line again. I like your story.
I like your picture and the picture that you went down the zip line.Do you know the person that called you?
After listening to your story, some of us want to go on a zip line. From the second graders in Miss P and Mrs. Lamberson’s class
I felt happy.
I like you picture and your drawing.
Good job with your story organization and lead! Thanks for sharing such and exciting story!
Miss Birdsall
This was a great thing to write about! I don’t know anything about riding on a zip line, so I learned many new things listening to your story. I could really tell your beginning, middle, and end parts of the story. Just like Mrs. Bartels, I loved your onomatopoeia, too! Your lead really made me want to keep listening! Can’t wait to hear more from you!
how feel when u went to canp.
Hi Boomer,
I am afraid of going down the zip line, but hearing you talk about it, left me thinking that maybe, just maybe, I could have fun going down one.
Nice job with your writing. I learned a new word: harness. Which I understand helps keep you safe when you go down the zip line along with your helmet, right?
I also really liked that you added the onomatopoeia to your story. The word “zoom” makes your story fun. I can’t wait to see your next story! Keep up the good work!
I want to do the zip line next year at camp.
I think you had a great idea for this story. I also liked your details. Would you go down the zip line again?