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Author’s Spotlight-Fernandito
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– December 8, 2010
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i miss you may
boomer I did not fall asleep in the car
Fernandito did you fall asleep in the car.
Mery I liked the part when he feel asleep in the car.
charlie thank you for the coment.
I like your details and your statues.
i like the part when your brother fall a sleep in the car.
You have a wonderful story! I especially loved how you included a simile: “sun was shining bright as the stars”. Very good writing!
Miss Birdsall
thank you dad for the mesig.
It was a very good story ! was the rain and the lightening very big?
Hi brayan just i want to tell u good job keep goin like that u making good job i love u. Atte. U dad.
Hi Fernandito,
What a fun family day story! I really like the detail about what you did in the car while your brother and sister feel asleep. Your description helped me see a picture in my head.
I also liked that you said that there were statues in the park. I would have never guest that there were statues in the park. Nice job adding details to make your story interesting. Keep up the good work Fernandito!
I went on july20 2010.
I like your pictures because its like going.
when did you go fernandito?
Wow! What a great story! You did a really nice job of writing a story with a beginning, middle, and an end. Keep up the good work!