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Emerson is in ELL level 2!!
Author’s spotlight -Emerson
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– December 8, 2010
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thinks guys. i will keep it up Mrs.Bartels
i like the part when your team score. i miss you i want you to come bake to Miss.P class.
I like the picture that you draw.How many people are in a team?
I like your soccer Team.
We really liked your illustrations.
This is a great story, I really liked how you built up the suspense of your goal! Thanks for sharing about Africa too!
Miss Birdsall
hey sup
I felt so happy when i made the goal.
Emerson,
What a thrilling story! I wondered the whole time id you where going to score a goal!
Your illustrations are wonderful, they really add to your story. Good work with the organization of your story. You had a beginning, middle and end.
Keep up the good work!
what is the driver?
I liked your pictures. How did it feel when you make the goal?
What a nice story! I love that you wrote a story about a time when you were in Africa. Did you end the game in a tie? Was it over after your last goal? I can’t wait to hear more of your stories!