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Author’s Spotlight – Hannah
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– November 24, 2010
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i like your story
Do Miss. Peterson ever leave a message/comments?
i didn’t feel sad when my bike is ruin.
my bike was ruin
你好
mrs.peterson what kind of story did hannah wrote
no,i did’t get a new bike. i use my old bike.
Will you fill sad if someone that you don’t now that got hurt?
thank you but if I ate all the candy’s I’ll be very sure I’ll get more then 5 cavaities !
It was my cousin bike got ruined .she went down the heal very fast!
yes.i did felt sad for her
When jinling tiyer was flat did you felt sad.
i happy that you got your candy. how did your bike ran in to a rock ?
Yes and the the bike that got ruined was the new bike.
You did a wonderful job writing your story! Thanks for sharing!
Miss Birdsall
This was such a fun story to listen to! I remember when your cousin went to Holmes! Just like Mrs. Bartels, I really liked all of your dialogue. It made your story really interesting. I also like when you said the tire was “ruined.” That was great word choice! I’ll be excited to hear your next story!
thankyou!
my mom wasn”t eating ate the buffet, she was working in the buffet
I like the picture of when your cousin ran over the rock. Did your cousin and you ate all the cadies?
Hi Hannah!
Good job adding dialogue to your story! I made the story fun to listen to.
I wonder if you could tell us a little more about the buffet. Was your mother eating at the buffet when you got the flat tire?
Nice work!
Mary says hi Hannah i like your picture of your cousin ran in to a rock .
I liked the picture of your cousin. Did your cousin get a new bike?