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– December 8, 2010
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I can tell you worked hard on this story! Thanks for sharing!
Miss Birdsall
i like the part when you what your friend home and you gift her candy you have the nice story you are the best friend in my life
I shared many can dies with my friends.
Wow! You are writing much bigger stories now! I liked your beginning, middle, and end. You added nice details like what you drew pictures of with your friends. I’m glad you get to spend time with your friends. Spending time with my friends makes me really happy, too! Keep up the good work!
Cool story Pat!
How fun that you get to go play and draw with Boomer. And how fun that your friends come visit you!
Good job with your story. You have very good organization, a beginning, middle and end.
Also I like that you added how you felt at the end of your story. I makes me think about how spending time with also makes me feel happy.
Thanks for sharing and keep up the hard work!
I like the part when you played with your friends.
you shared candys to your friend, you are shuch a good friend!how much candys did you shared with your friend?
I liked your pictures and your sound is very clear. And you shared candys to your friend.You are so nice!